| 结构是你作文中最重要的部分。评分者会扫描你文章中的结构,并判断是否具有标准的格式和标准的逻辑过渡。 作文中常用套句 下文中出现的A,B,“…"(某事物),“sb"( somebody), 要在写作中要根据上下文进行适当替换。 开头: When it comes to …, some think … There is a public debate today that … A is a common way of …, but is it a wise one? Recently the problem has been broughtsintosfocus. 提出观点: Now there is a growing awareness that… It is time we explore the truth of … Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible. 进一步提出观点: … but that is the only part of the history. Another equally important aspect is … A is but one of the many effects. Another is … Besides, other reasons are… 提出假想例子的方式: Suppose that… Just imagine what would be like if… It is reasonable to expect… It is not surprising that… 举普通例子: For example(instance),… … such as A,B,C and so on (so forth) A good case in point is… A particular example for this is… 引用: One of the greatest early writers said … “Knowledge is power", such is the remark of … “……". That is how sb comment ( criticize/ praise…). “……". How often we hear such words like there. 讲故事(先说故事主体),this story is not rare …, such dilemma we often meet in daily life …, the story still has a realistic significance. 提出原因: There are many reasons for … Why … , for one thing,… The answer to this problem involves many factors. Any discussion about this problem would inevitably involves … The first reason can be obliviously seen. Most people would agree that… Some people may neglect that in fact … Others suggest that… Part of the explanation is … 进行对比: The advantages for A outweigh the disadvantages of… Although A enjoys a distinct advantage … Indeed , A carries much weight than B when sth is concerned. A maybe … , but it suffers from the disadvantage that… 承上启下: To understand the truth of …, it is also important to see… A study of … will make this point clear 让步: Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as… I do not deny that A has its own merits. 结尾: From what has been discussed above, we may safely drawthe conclusion that … In summary, it is wiser … In short… 连接词的妙 用连词例子: (1)表示时间与频率的词汇:in general, every, some, after, on the whole, usually, most, at other times, in most cases, frequently, main, finally, as a rule, rarely, before, meanwhile. (2)表示附加的词:additionally, as well as, just as, again, along with, also, further, furthermore, likewise, in the same manner, in the same way, in addition to, (3)引出例子:for example, namely, for instance, as an example, that is (4)表示转折:although, instead, rather than, but, nevertheless, though, however, on the other hand, otherwise (5)得出结论:all in all, in consequence, in brief, as a result, the point is, in conclusion, therefore, hence, in sum. 模板 (1)介绍性段落(2-4句)确保使文章的开头段落简洁,有效和具有说服力。以下是介绍性段落应该具备的内容: 简单解析作文题目。 表现出你已经理解了这个题目(比如,通过分别阐述双方观点)。 在该问题上表明你的观点立场(但还不到需要细节的时候)。 开头段落较简单的模板(2句): a) Whether______ depends on______b) (插入你的观点),______. (2)第一个主体段落(3-5句) 开始阐述你最重要的理由,同时举一两个例子支持来佐证: a) The chief reason for my view is______. b) For example,______. c) Moreover, ______. d) Finally,______. (3)第二个主体段落 用第二个理由来展开你的观点。至少引用一个例子来让明你的理由。 表述你的第二个理由(只要一个)。 提供推理或者证据支持这个理由。 以下是第二个主体段落的模板样本: a) Another reason for my view is______. b) Specifically,______. c) The result is,______. (4)第三个主体段落(可有可无)在这一段,你可以提出一个相反的观点或者推理,然后反驳它进一步加强你的观点,这就是以退为进的战术。 承认可能存在着一个不同的观点或者相反的推理。 为这个不同的观点提供推理或者例子。 反驳它。 以下是该段的模板: a) Some might argue, ______. b) Yet,______. c) others might cite,______. d) However, ______. (5)结论性段落在这一段,你用1-3句话对你的观点作一个总结: 阐述你的观点。 简单地重述你在主体段落里的理由。 在结论段落中,你不要提供新的信息或者理由,这里不是推出新结论的地方。 a) In sum, I concur that ______. b) However,______; on the whole______. 介绍 结构是你作文中最重要的部分。评分者会扫描你文章中的结构,并判断是否具有标准的格式和标准的逻辑过渡。 开头/结论这两部分有效地提示了文章的结构和思路轨迹。 段落数:为了取悦评分者,你的作文应该有4至5段:开头,结论和三个“主体”段。每个段落大概包含2-5句(整篇文章300-400字)。 关于模板 这里的模板只起指导作用,你不一定严格照搬。为了迎合你的推理需要,你可以作一些修改。 以上每段的句子个数只是参考,具体要看你的文章内容多少而定。我们在模板中所用的过渡语句简洁单一,你可以借鉴使用。当然,在模板中“填空”时,你也可以自己的思路灵活变通。 |