| 第九题 Some people say that older people should live with their adult children. Other people sy that they shouldn't. Which do you think is a good practice? 试题分析 一 条件: 有人认为老人应与成人子女生活在一起/有人认为不应一道生活 二 要求: 谈谈哪种做法好 三 写作分析: 本题为家常话题,人人都有话可说,关键是确立自己的观点,思路要有条理.关于父母与子女的关系,发达国家的流行做法是子女成年之后另立门户,中国人几世同堂的局面也在改变,这是世界范围内相同的发展趋势.尽管如此,文章的观点仍可任意选择,只要言之有理,语言规范无误,判卷着也会公正判分.文章的结构仍可采用三步式. One of the topic in daily life is whether or not the older people should live with their adult children. My answer to the question is that it is betterr for them not to. To begin with, adult children, like their parents, love indenpendence and freedom, but their parents may still take them as children and unintentionally interfere in their affairs. The situation will be worse if the adult children are already married. In this case, the children have already built a new and closed world and any outside interference may lead to conflicts. Besides, the new menbers of the family have no blood relations with the parents. When the relationship between the inlaws and the parents is not harmonious, the sons or daughters of the parents will be in a dificult position. Secondly, people of different ages have different ways of life. The old people like a quiet, peaceful and regular life; whereas the young love noises, activities, and unrestrained enjoyment. If they live together, the old may feel that they are always disturbed and the young may feel that they are often handicapped. Furthermore, people of different generations have differrent views and values. What is quite normal to the parents may seem to be old-fashioned or wrong to the children. When they live together, they may disagree on maters ranging from minor domestic matters to national and interrnational issues. Consequently, family life may be unpleasant or even unbearable to both the old and the young. In short, if the parents and their adult children donot live together, both the old and the young can enjoy complete independence and freedom, live a life they like, and keep intact their affections for each other. Separate living does not mean separation of relations. The parents and their children can still visit and help each other if they stay in the same area. 范文写法说明 文章在语义上分三部分,但包含五个自然段,目的是使人感到一目了然.第一段叙述作文题内容,然后直接摆出自己观点,形成一个主题句,之后的三段为三个理由.最后一段起概括和说明的作用,同时文章收尾.在语言上,文章第一段含主题句,之后四段分别以逻辑词开头,使文章条理清楚,层次分明. |
