| 第十九题 Charateristics of three cities 
The chart sshows the results of a study that compared three major cities. Four characteristics of each city were measued on a scale from 0 to 90, with 90 being the most favourable evaluation. In which of the three cities would you prefer to live? Use information from the chart to suppose your choice. 试题分析 一 条件: 一个图表/三个城市/四方面情况(就业,气候,安全,娱乐) 二 要求: 选择自己欲在其中生活的城市,并更具图表信息说明理由 三 写作分析: 看清图表后再选择,选择时难以求全,应根据自身情况决定取舍.本题宜用演绎法写作.文章的逻辑顺序可按图表中的就业机会,气候,安全,娱乐四点,不足指出应说明自己的态度,主要应解释为什么在该方面做出牺牲. Though each of the three cities has its advantages and disadvantages according to the chart, I prefer to live in City C. I have made this choice because off the following reasons. Firstly, I am a husband and father who has to work to support myself and my family. Therefore I will go wherever there are the most employment opportunities. In this respect, City C is the best of the three. If I go there, it will be easier for me to find a job and it is likely that the pay will be better. Secondly, I am still a young man who loves activities and entertainment; and so do my wife and children. In this respect, City C is also the best of the three. If I live there, we will not have to worry about our income and we can go out and enjoy ourselves whenever we like. Thirdly, the climate of city C is not so bad. It is not as good as that of city B of course, but it is better than that in city A. We do not like very cold, very hot, or very wet weather, but we do not have a ery high demand for a good climate either. So long as the climate there is passable, it will pose no problem and we can live there quite comfortably. The only drawback of city C is its safety side. It is the worst of the three and has caused me some concern. I choose City C in spite of this problem because we think that we have to make some sacrifice for something more important. I also think that we can make up the short coming by taking adequate precautions. 范文写作分析: 文章采用演绎法,先谈选择结果,然后从四方面逐条说明.全文围绕首段中的主题,各段用逻辑词过渡,思路清晰,道理充分. 不足之处是字数不多,若再长一些,则会更好 第一段: 表明选择C城居住 第二段: 就业机会多 第三段: 娱乐条件好 第四段: 气候不太差 第五段: 安全方面做出牺牲,可用提高防护措施来弥补 |
